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Permalink | Quote | +Rep by HollowsEdge » May 22, 2013 3:38am | Report
Thanks ComicBookGuy ill let u know how i go :)

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Permalink | Quote | +Rep by Sunfall » May 22, 2013 4:48am | Report
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Waiting on a good new MOBA, please.

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Permalink | Quote | +Rep by TheAmazingComicBookGuy » May 22, 2013 5:19am | Report
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what did I just read?

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Permalink | Quote | +Rep by sorcerer455 » May 22, 2013 7:35am | Report
Your Level: 11 (if you mean the game level)
The amount of posts and views the guide has: 6 Posts, 7789 Views
Have you read any guides to making guides (I recommend going to mobafire for them): Yes I have read one.
God: Arachne
Guide's link: https://www.smitefire.com/smite/guide/arachne-the-weaver-guide-977
Why you want it to be reviewed: I like getting feedback!
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Permalink | Quote | +Rep by TheAmazingComicBookGuy » May 22, 2013 9:03am | Report
sorcerer455 wrote:

Your Level: 11 (if you mean the game level)
The amount of posts and views the guide has: 6 Posts, 7789 Views
Have you read any guides to making guides (I recommend going to mobafire for them): Yes I have read one.
God: Arachne
Guide's link: https://www.smitefire.com/smite/guide/arachne-the-weaver-guide-977
Why you want it to be reviewed: I like getting feedback!

Guide review!
Let me start off by saying that I consider your level (11) kinda low to write a guide, but it's ok if the guide is ok :P the reason behind that is that people below level 30 can't know the full meta just yet, but now that is out of the way let me review it :)
Pros!
- Good use of coding which makes for a good overall look
- You know about the god and her abilities
- No really obvious grammar mistakes
- Arena and Domi which is nice
Cons!
- Questionable, but not all that bad build and skill section (even with your explanation I don't really think it is a very good build with gauntlet, not that sure about bow and I think dev's could be switched off with soul eater)
- Good guide, but a bit lacking of possibly more information (god matchups, arena and domi not explained)
- The rest of the guide is full of colors, but Ganking only has 1 icon :P
Improvements!
- Make this guide longer, include matchups, arena and domi ect.
- Try to level up and explore the game a bit more ;)

Final verdict is... 7.5-8! This is a very good guide, just lacking info
Which makes for an upvote!

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Permalink | Quote | +Rep by coldhotshot » May 22, 2013 11:41am | Report
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Permalink | Quote | +Rep by JararoNatsu » May 22, 2013 11:45am | Report


what did I just read?



She's suggesting that she can't compute you having a good idea. She's the cranky CPU, after all.

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Permalink | Quote | +Rep by TheAmazingComicBookGuy » May 22, 2013 11:47am | Report
JararoNatsu wrote:




She's suggesting that she can't compute you having a good idea. She's the cranky CPU, after all.

I understand, but I have good ideas all the time >(

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Permalink | Quote | +Rep by TheAmazingComicBookGuy » May 28, 2013 9:25am | Report
Review 2.
RazeMage's Apollo guide!
Guide review!
You're level 24 which isn't that bad to write a guide so I won't go in on that
Pros!
- Good use of coding which makes for a good overall look (nice use of colors, icons ect.)
- You know about the god and his abilities
- Lot of builds and explanation of the items always makes me happy
- Guide is very nicely completed
Cons!
- Found some grammar mistakes and typos (sumaryy, speed attack, ect.)
- I personally would rethink some pros and cons and maybe even the introduction (never say that you are a nooby or amateur)
Improvements!
- Just improve the grammar imo ;)
Final verdict is... 8.5-9! This is a very good guide, just improve the cons a bit and you will score even higher ;)

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Permalink | Quote | +Rep by TheAmazingComicBookGuy » June 3, 2013 7:25am | Report
Bump!

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