[SubJuly] "Kranon The Relentless"

Very clean god idea!

I like him, the passive might hurt ALOT against some mages, he should still take damage while reflecting though, just my opinion but you don't have to change it.

Passive: Overpowered as HELL. I don't care if it has a 150 second cool down; you can make someone oneshot themselves. It's stupid, luck-based, and really just a bad passive that's useless 90% of the time and then incredibly overpowered when it does work. I suggest incorporating some kind of fear mechanic instead, since it's called "the eye of terror."

Skill 1: Overpowered, because it's a 1.4 sec stun at max rank with an 8 second cooldown that deals really good damage. Reduce the stun duration or damage and increase CD.

Skill 2: You didn't put any tick numbers. Like, how many ticks? Also, this ability seems to deal a **** ton of burst damage. But it seems fine, but I don't know the ticks.

Skill 3: REWORK THIS SKILL. IF YOU DO ONE THING FROM MY SUGGESTIONS, REWORK THIS SKILL. It's a purely luck based mechanic that's incredibly overpowered no matter what it does. Better-than-beads, better-than-Art-buff, better-than-mystical-mail, and slow immunity. It's not fun to use at all. It causes nothing but pure frustration on both ends; if you use it and didn't get what you want, you're screwed over by your own ability; if you get killed because the enemy got a stupid steroid, you get pissed at an overpowered ability supposedly being balanced due to it being "random." Have a look at Chaos Knight from DotA if you want to see a luck-based mechanic that works.

Ult: How the hell will the things teleport? And if it's automatic, then it'll be stupid if they teleport away right after you summon them because the tower on the other side of the map is being sieged. Aside from that, the damage these things deal is overpowered as hell; easily matching Cat Call early game and exceeding it easily late game, not to mention the percent healing is just insane. It's just another ridiculous ult that does everything, from damage to bodyblocking to mobility to healing. Overpowered. I suggest changing it, dunno how. It's unacceptable in it�s current state, however.

General: With the kit you've given him, everyone will build this guy pure assassin, since his CC and base AND scaling damage is insane. Loki has 420% scalings on abilities + 1 basic attack, Kranon has a minimum of 390% scalings (one basic attack and one ult proc when stunned), on top of more and better CC and higher base damage.

Other: Uh, he has no sustain skill and yet is labeled "high sustain"...

Suggestions: I suggest you rework his kit to make him more like a bruiser or fighter. Unlike assassins, fighters/bruisers have lower cooldowns (if they are ability-based bruisers) and while they can have burst damage, it shouldn't reach the level of an assassin's. Alternatively, a basic attack based fighter needs some incentive to basic attack and KEEP basic attacking. For example, Jax from LoL has a increasing steroid as he basic attacks, a very short CC steroid for his basics and his jump, and an ability that deals more damage the more attacks he avoids while it's active. Basically, make him want to stay in the fight, instead of unloading all of his abilities into a single target and then running away. But this is a bruiser from another MOBA, not Smite.

If you want to make them more of a Smite-like bruiser, ignore everything in the previous paragraph. Feel free to give him tons of burst, just make him have some form of tankiness, whether it's a heal skill or a protections steroid or damage reduction or whatever. Just be careful about the numbers, as I detailed in the sections on individual skills.