Ymir - The ICE Tank

You really didn't test this thoroughly, did you? It's impossible to get Shield of Regrowth on Ymir. He does magical damage and as such can't get items that give him physical power. Please, test your build thoroughly before and after you make a your guide with it.

Im greatfull to both of you and I will look more in to it :) thank you for losing time for me explaining how to make tutorial and few extra tips ^^ I try to make the guide better. Thank you!

Couple things
>There's like no magic protection. You have Mystical Mark, Breastplate of Valor, and Sovereignty for physical, but only Stone of Gaia for magic protection. I don't count Shield of Regrowth for two reasons: the amount it gives is mediocre, and you CAN'T USE IT. It has physical power, Ymir is magical. You literally can't use the item, the game doesn't let you.

>As a tank you should be matching Frost Breath over Glacial Strike. As a tank, you need CC to be useful, and the increasing length of the stun is nice. At the LEAST, interwork more ranks of the skill early in the game, if you're going to still max GS.

>You have 0 CC Reduction. You went with plated greaves, too, so you literally have 0. As a tank who doesn't have Preemptive Strike, Charge Prey, Belly Flop, Lunge, Death From Below, etc, you have no gap closer. Compound this with no CC reduction, and they'll just CC you once and slowly walk away. You have literally 0 way to catch you opponent unless it's in the jungle and you can wall them off from an escape *perfectly*. In reality, there's no way you're ever going to catch them.

>You have no decent health in your items. Mystical Mark and Sovereignty don't provide enough to matter, so even though you have a severe amount of physical defense, with Titan's Bane and Executioner being core items on most ADC's, your low health pool is going to rot you.

>Girdle of Might is iffy. Sure it helps allies, but you would rather have Beads, Aegis, Sprint, or Crippling Curse. Basically, Your allies aren't doing damage if you're CC'd/Dead, and they're being focused. They are, however, doing damage, if you're not CC'd or Dead, and are peeling for them with the wall or icebreath.

Guide Tips
>Items Section. Required, explains why you chose what you chose
>Alternative Section. No build is ever 100% efficient, so if their/your team comp is different, explain what could be a better pick up in one situation
>Skill Section. Why do you order it in that way?
>Laning Tips. Especially important for a support tank, because your ally relies on your in lane.
>Team-Fight protocol. What's your role? When do you initiate, versus when do you peel for allies?

Hope this helps.

Woah, this guide needs a lot more content.

You seem to be new to this, but be aware that I will show no mercy for a lax attitude. Inexperience, yes, laziness, no. Don't use the old "first guide" excuse to explain away this travesty.

Literally, all you have is an item build, a few (extremely basic) tips, and s rather threadbare pros and cons section. This isn't a guide, it's a skeleton of one. Dead. Empty. Depressing. Dismal.

Here's what I consider necessary for a guide to be considered as such:

A build, pros and cons, item explanations, build explanations, role in teamfights, and role in lane. The last two can be stretched a bit, like instead putting a section on early and late game.

I can't rate this guide, since it'll make me feel bad. Seriously, a downvote is like punching a mentally infirm child. Please, fill this guide up.