god design

New God Hypnos, The God Of Sleep
Hello this is my first time posting on this website just thought I would share two designs I came up with one being Hypnos and another that is yet to be named. Keep in mind I am not by any means a professional game designer or close to one also note how I did not put specific numbers for some of the abilities if I did that some stuff would be more unbalanced than it already is. Last thing sorry for any typos.

Hypnos

Ability 1: Nightmare
Hypnos infests the minds of enemies in a target area with nightmares dealing damage over time over 6 seconds after the 6 seconds is up tArgets are slowed by 20% for 3 seconds.

Ability 2: Slumber
Hypnos falls into a deep sleep for 3 seconds gaining 75% damage reduction and regenerating mana for the duration. After the effect Hypnos gains a buff that increases the damage of the next ability by 50%. This buff can stack up to 3 times but only one charge is used per ability.

Ability 3: Fatigue
Hypnos fatigues enemies in a large area in front of him slowing and damaging enemies along with the slow fatigue also applies a debuff that increase all damage overtime damage on all enemies by a scaling percent.

Ability 4: Exhaust
Hypnos puts a single target to sleep for 15 seconds stunning them and putting a damage over time effect on the target. Any damage other than Hypnos's damage overtime effects will break the stun however the damage over time effect stays regardless.

Passive: Unstable Dream
Hypnos's auto Attacks deal 12% of the full duration damage of any damage over time affect on the target.
EXAMPLE: Nightmare is doing a total of 100 damage over 6 seconds Exhaust is doing 200 damage over 15 seconds every auto attack while these two DOTS are on the target is doing an extra 36 damage. This does stack with any damage over time effect steroid(fatigue, slumber). So if I have fatigue on the target and use both Exhaust and nightmare with stacks of slumber and this combo is doing a total of 1000 damage(again this is just and example this number means nothing) than every auto attack will be doing 120 extra damage as long as both buffed dots are present.

Sorry for the big block of text I typed this on an iPad.

A FIFTEEN SECOND STUN?!?!?! WHAT?!?!

Not really a stun if the person takes any damage at all he is free also beads op

The problem with that is that , it is either OP or UP. you can tower dive, sleep the enemy and pretty much destroy a tower, especially in late game. Though, it's useless in teamfight

that's what we call a mesmerize

This god is a little op in 1v1's. Considering if it was in the jungle you can just press 2 and basically escape. You could re-call right in front of them.

No numbers. Bad.