-Frostalis for all hunters-

Your build hasn't got any attack speed. Instead of jotunn's wrath buy ichaival, as a hunter your main attack is with you basic attack so you do not really need the mana and the cooldown. Ichaival gives you 30% attackspeed and 10 penetration. His passive is that after 3 basic attacks your next ability wil have 30 more physical power. If you change warrior tabi for ninja tabi you will have 18 % more attack speed, but you will lose 20 physical power. However, the attack speed is necassary as hou will attack quicker you will need less time to kill because of your crits who will go like lightening.

Ty guys for telling me about boots cuz from 360 buy using boots u jump to 460(approx..)which is indeed a great escaping tool ....
And yes u r indeed right more criticals is waste it should be paired with life steal for higher sustainance.

Yeah, you really only need Rage and Deathbringer to get enough crit, usually I'll take malice as my last item but it all depends. You really don't need that much crit because with Rage and Deathbringer you're already critting on almost every hit to begin with.

Well you need boots. Every god needs boots. Replace Brawler's Beat Stick and get it in the beginning. There is also no attack speed. For a hunter that is essential. You can replace Malice with some attack speed. You have enough crit anyway.