Xuan Wu, Protector of the North

Second attempt at a SMITE god, enjoy and comment (Please)

Xuan Wu, Protector of the North

Pantheon: Chinese
Health: 580 (+84/ 2260)
Mana: 300 (+55/ 1400)
Speed: 0.5 (+0.02/ 0.9)
P. Protection: 15 (+3.75/ 90)
M. Protection: 13 (+2.95/ 62)
Basic Damage: 30 (+2/ 70)

"Welcome to the SMITE god Revel for Xuan Wu, Protector of the North. Hyeonmu, Genbu, Huyền Vũ, like all of the four guardian beasts whom protect the four celestial points, Xuan Wu is know by many names, but unlike the rest he is not one, but two. Formed from the stomach and intestines of a god by the same name, the wise tortoise and powerful snake created carnage and mayhem, then the god they were made from stopped them. After seeing what they had done they felt remorse and seeing this remorse, the god decided to spare them and train them to be protectors as their redemption. Ever kind and benevolent protectors their presence on the battlefield is strange, made even stranger by the fact that he and Suzaku fight for different pantheons. Is this war between gods so great that they must go on the offensive in stead of remain on defense, or could it simply be a fight between opposing forces, regardless of their reason they shall show their might."

"Xuan Wu enter SMITE as a Physical Tank. Xuan Wu's Passive is, "Tortoise Longevity Snakes Venom." Two heads are better then one, and two bodies help as well. Xuan Wu can keep fighting after their health reaches zero, in till they have been hit three more times, further more all of their basic attacks have a chance of poisoning the enemy for 1 second, dealing extra damage."

"Xuan Wu's first ability is, "Northern Gate." Xuan Wu places a gate in front of them, lasting for a time (5/6/6/8/9), blocking enemies from passing but allowing allies through. Further more, if pointer South it lasts less time (3/2/2/1/1), and when pointed North it lasts lounger for a time (2/3/3/4/5)." Cool down 17 seconds, Mana cost 35/40/48/60/70

"Xuan Wu's second ability is, "Venomous Sins." Xuan Wu snake charges for 3 seconds, condensing his venom into his mouth, and then fires it in a wave dealing damage (20/20/30/45/50). It also poisons enemies for (1/1/2/2/3) seconds dealing a percentage (3%/4%/5%/5%/8%) of their health as damage every .8 seconds. This poison is even more potent if the enemy has committed sins adding a second for every kill they have since last time this ability was used." Cool down 22 second, Mana Cost 50/58/62/78/84

"Xuan Wu's third ability is, "Virtuous Shell." Xuan Wu tortoise charges for 3 seconds, collecting his energy, and then releases it in a 45 unit radius, healing by a percentage (2%/3%/3%/5%/6%) of Xuan Wu health, and increasing their physical and magical protection by a percentage (4%/4%/6%/7%/10%) of their protection for a time (5/6/6/7/8). It also responds to virtue increasing the time of the protection by 1 for ever 2 assists." Cool down 20 second, Mana cost 60/62/70/74/86

"Xuan Wu's ultimate is, "Black Tortoise." Xuan Wu calls of the power of water, to wash away their allies sins, removing all negative status effects (poison, stun, etc.) and punish their enemies dealing a great amount of damage (90/100/120/150/200)" Cool down 78 seconds Mana cost 100/110/125/130/150

People, please, tell me how good (or bad) I did.